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No lies...just stories
Hello for the second time this morning I suppose...

I am going to post a poem I wrote...hmm...maybe four months ago I don't remember when, but that matters little to none. If you like it good job, if not well that's okay I'm no poet and I don't want to be either. I'll get better entries in at some time as for now I'm a little busy.
I haven't edited this ever since I've written it and I don't remember how it is exactly but we shall see...you may comment on it if you wish, be the comment be good or bad, all are welcome and I care not what kind of comments it may receive. Also if you want me to write about a certain thing you may comment I'll read them all, or give me a personal message. Well that's enough talking...

The night skies glisten with stars it's beautiful wouldn't you agree
It would be so much better a sight here with you, with me
Every passing day makes me feel a little bit more alone
But if you hadn't met me I'd be just fine on my own
I've never felt so lonely, then you came along
Nothing in my mind seems rights so is it wrong?
So now…what am I supposed to do?
I feel strung out, I'm addicted to you
Every day I find myself staring into space
Nothing really coming to mind only your face
I'm to afraid to even come anywhere near
I don't know why it happens probably fear
My heart stops dead whenever you come too close
Getting to many mixed feelings it's an overdose
My body aches, now that you're here
I wish these feelings would just go…disappear
I can't come up with any of the right words to explain it
I've tried a million times but I always submit
I know it's probably simple, just in the asking
But I think I spend to much time in thought…basking
The longer I wait the more I stress
But I feel as though I can give you nothing, no happiness
I didn't think it would be as crazy as this
I hate to think that such feeling even exists
I try everything in attempts to forget
But it's too strong a feeling my mind is dead set
Who has time for tears?
Whoever does it's none of my business it's theirs
Everyday, every moment it feels relived
I feel I don't have much left to give
My will is something I've been deprived of
I never thought I'd sit around and cry for you love…
Until now…


That's all I have, thank you for reading...Milfeulle is great!! Haha that was funny, she is great but Vanilla H is greater than all!!

It's not a lie...It's just that I'm...A story teller!!

JKiller one8seven
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  • User Comments: [1]
    moete
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    Sat May 10, 2008 @ 05:50pm


    That was an AMAZING poem! haha you scared me at the end with Milfeulle is great.


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