Edited: Sunday August 12th Yay! I'm back from camping and I'm happy to see at least 10 comments. ^^ *does happy dance*
Well, I sort of did have to rush this page since my camping trip came pretty impromptu. But I managed it right on time! (I literally left 10 minutes after I posted this) Not exactly my best stuff but still I think I like how Alba came out in this one. It has been a while since I drew him so I was scared of how he'd end up.
And I know, I know... they don't look a like. >_< But I mean honestly, it's hard without the colors. lol. I mean, with no colors Josh and JB looks a like (apparently) but with colors there's no way anyone can mistake them for each other. lol. Well, Both Alba and BonClay have deep navy blue hair that borders on black. I'm used to coloring Alba's hair a bit more blue though but to be fair it IS a bit lighter then the big's bro's. ^^
I also really like the simplistic way I draw Bubbleh. ^^ Actually, she was the first panel I draw of the whole page. lol While, as others have mentioned it is a slow page, it is also the beginning to the chapter so you guys will see things pick up later.
Next Page: August 19th
I'D LIKE TO ADDRESS: BOWBS GUILD MEMBERS
PLEASE guys. PLEASE starting taking interest in the guild crying I'm working really hard to add loads of forums for everyone to play around in so I'd feel like my work was worth something if you guys post a bit. cry that's all.
P.S: Join my guild! You get lots of BOWBS info and a lot more! *Remolding and looking for members* - PLEASE POST GUYS!whee BOWBS GUILD
Korda · Community Member · Sat Aug 11, 2007 @ 12:39am
bella i luv ur art especially the ones in the laj
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ritikii · Community Member · Sat Aug 11, 2007 @ 12:50am
Hmm.... kind of a slow page here.... but it's the start of a chapter so I'm not surprised. Heheh, the more I think about that fourth panel the funnier it gets...
and hey, have fun camping!
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The Kovie · Community Member · Sat Aug 11, 2007 @ 02:15pm
I love the little flowers in the back of the third panel, they're so cute. domokun Fourth panel is still my favorite though.
@ kawaifox11: Well, those are my commissions lines so they are a lot more detailed. Thanks though. ^^; @Kaede: Oh! You changed your name! biggrin @ shiyonin: She's thinking that JB is strange. wink
My word, Bella! Your art makes me want to print it out and make it into an actual book. And I love the panel with all the "gasping" and "plot twists".
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Midnitergrl · Community Member · Mon Aug 13, 2007 @ 01:48am
That was awfully rude. BonClay could have at least attempted to answer him! ;D
I love the third panel. <3
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Rai Asukai · Community Member · Mon Aug 13, 2007 @ 01:57am
BELLA! this page is actually really really really really good biggrin cant wait for the next one smile your story's pretty amazing too... just wondering, are you making up the story as you go, or do you already have it planned?
oh, and i'd thought i'd say that you're guild's really really really awesome too smile and there's so many friendly people there !!! i'm glad to be in it.!
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hanimonster · Community Member · Mon Aug 13, 2007 @ 04:04am
Lol!! I had the same reaction as Bubbleh! XDDD
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limekola · Community Member · Mon Aug 13, 2007 @ 04:29am
I just LOVE your manga ;3 It makes me happy to read it! And its gaia, not the boring kind of gaia comics I'm used to seeing. It is sooooo well done and put together. The story, the panels EVERYTHING! I can't wait for the next page :] Keep it up ^^ ~B~T~W~ are the characters real gaians? If sooo which is probably a yes, their personalities are terrific ^^ I would join your guild, but right now isn't the time for me since I don't think I would be on enough to post or anything. I may join later though when I know I can commit to posting ^^
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Spatsula · Community Member · Mon Aug 13, 2007 @ 05:09am
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Okay, the BOWBS crew totally rules. lol I LOVE my reaction. Totally how I'd handle things. I don't surprise easily. domokun LUV Mizzy too! Her face is precious! rofl
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Josh_JB_Benton · Community Member · Mon Aug 13, 2007 @ 06:49am
Sooo Cool Just as good as it is every time keep up the good work just can wait to see the next page and to see you girl love ya
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Alicia Lestrange · Community Member · Mon Aug 13, 2007 @ 07:49pm
Awwww, JB had his violence denied. Poor guy.
As for the brothers, don't worry about it. Some siblings don't look anything alike. I have a friend, who has dark skin, black hair and is short. his sister is amazingly tall, red hair, pale skin. Total opposites. You can see similarities though.
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Kuromorigawa Ni · Community Member · Mon Aug 13, 2007 @ 08:41pm
I haven't read it for a while since I was on holiday and not on gaia for a while, but I still love your manga!
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Aeshin · Community Member · Tue Aug 14, 2007 @ 10:59am
Woots for Brothers!!! ^^ .................................................. 0.o .................................................. Brothers???
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Fiare La Amato · Community Member · Tue Aug 14, 2007 @ 11:48am
I love the drawings as usual. heart I love Alba's eye in the first panel...
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snowtiger6776 · Community Member · Wed Aug 15, 2007 @ 09:03pm
i love this manga it's awesome!!! i just subscribed!!! i can't wait to read more!! xd
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kiishimi · Community Member · Wed Aug 15, 2007 @ 10:00pm
Yeah Snow! I'm rather proud of Alba's face in general. biggrinheart ~*Bella*~
Akuma_ Higurashi · Community Member · Thu Aug 16, 2007 @ 12:17am
Bella! Ahhhh I'm so sorry I haven't commented much at all. I've been falling behind in your comic, and now that I've finally returned there are so many beautiful new occurrences. Seeing the characters in color was really awesome. I always love seeing the detail in your work. Especially the way you ink the hair. So lovely. *have a basket of cookies* whee
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yukidream13 · Community Member · Fri Aug 17, 2007 @ 07:23pm
Guess who's back? Back again! Alba's back! Tell a friend! LOL I just felt like being silly. rofldramallama
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Shinja_Mizuno · Community Member · Sat Aug 18, 2007 @ 08:24am