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I'm thinking a million nouns,
In my head I'm creating a cloud,
Sometimes I can stand it's sound,
but this time it's way too god damn loud,
With this endurance I'll take pain from all around,
Clipping the nonsense concepts that I don't accept,
Allows me not only to exert mental pressure I've found,
But to erase the small steps leading to the s**t I'd hate to intercept,
Feel free to jump on this travelling time bind,
Like you want to stop thinking about memories in a rewind,
Sometimes it's easy to chase the past,
but once you got me running I don't plan on going that fast,
Some bitches I remember with their huckle chuckle laugh,
I remember screwing me over in the past,
Even if their vocals are starting to sound like a ******** hole in half,
The thing that feels to best is to prove that their just ******** trash,
Haha,
whose laughing now,
You may not be consuming and chowing down,
but s**t girl you look like a ******** cow,
Naw I'm just kidding.... or maybe not,
Let's be honest,
Making fun of you now is way better,
than how we fought,
I can't believe I used to thought,
that you would never let me rot,
but you caught me with a lot,
of tears down and snot,
Simply I'm just educated and dumb,
Ends from whores to s**t that's not fun,
So maybe I'll run until the sun shine is done,
I do expect to learn but never expected to have won.
- by Ikuo Jinichi |
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- | Submitted on 08/27/2013 |
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- Title: This is a random poem
- Artist: Ikuo Jinichi
- Description: With lots of cussing :)
- Date: 08/27/2013
- Tags: random poem
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Nemone - 10/17/2013
- Hehe, maybe you should title this one "Rage".
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- whathebeans - 08/27/2013
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I rather enjoy this poem. The concept was more or less, revenge, right? Like payback to a girl who you had broken up with perhaps? If so, you display that perfectly. There are just some small things that trip me up, so if you want some criticism, just PM me c:
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