In Anarchy We Fall

• Artist: Mecca Against Reality
• Description: Feeling upset.
• Date: 09/29/2011
• Tags: anarchy fall

In Anarchy We Fall

Cataclysm poured through a veined vessel
Clasping forlorn to greying hands
Pulled readily from an overworking seizure
Mottled with irking substance, daring, but lifeless

Tugging at the reigns of an imperfected chance
Creating a chasm of empty thoughts
Cutting into the sanctity of a chiseled mirror
Reflecting the water as the broken become beacons

In eyes, befuddled, by the presence of an inner demon
Scratching at the walls of skin, desperate to break surface
Kept tucked tight in sanctuary, an oblivion dispersing amid a lie
Eternity spread in boundless proportions, drowning...

Witless with fear and absent remains
A cacaphony resounds into ears filled with resonance
Distorted grievances attacking with precision
Humor abandoned before subtlety is mistaken

Keen hearts and frailer limbs, saturated with failure
Amortentia of another kind, poisoned with hate, doused and wry
Worry stinging at the back of your eyelids, pinprick sensation
Foggy breath dying as muscles spasm into slumber

Comments

[MyMindIsAWeapon]

wow... u just made something really disturbing sound really allouring... its really good and your diction (blegh, not to sound like a copycat of the guy who commented before me, i just like that word) is amazing. the ending is satisfying, yet haunting, and overall really good

[XxX_TALL-GiRL-RAP_XxX]

omg so so so so so beautiful

[in a pinto forever]

a 5/5 across the board: that's something I give once in a blue moon.
The word choice is beautiful. You love your diction, don't you?
The rhyming is subtle; unorthodox: Both words synonymous, at least in my thesaurus, with "excellent."
The rhythm, besides actually EXISTING for once (geez), is augmented by the assonance and alliteration used throughout.
Everything comes together to really help bring out the expression of the poem.
And what can you say?--you're awesome.