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The bass-toned air dove through the snips that littered his cuticles, running chills up his arms and raising every hair as it passed - the perfect contrast as her heated hands drifted dreamingly across his skin. The speakers thrashed and thumped: a verbatim mocking his throbbing chest and shaking his stomach until acids tingle his tongue[sils]. Strobes, terrorizing his senses, closed in with the barbarity of gunfire and blacked his sight from the hunted - foxtrotting through mists of body-heat and hormones condensed on her gleaming features.
Biting the bullet brings more than gun-smoke, stinging his throat and straining his diaphragm to move after the first boom boom click of it exploring his gums and crumbling his teeth (ashes to ashes)
rust breeds rust -
contaminating his lips
under her oiled grin.
- Title: Untitled #?
- Artist: Adimurti
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Description:
Another Haibun poem. I wrote this for a duelling contest.
[[Please comment if you rate, just to say what you think! I'm always looking for feedback, positive or otherwise!]] - Date: 08/20/2011
- Tags: haibun haikai club hunt
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