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down to the midnight lake
for my soul to take
the story i tell is of a beautiful gothic girl
who went to swim in the swirling hell
upon the rafter deck of high
so she stood with pride
i hide in the water
seeing this beauty swim
you see i am deseced
i died here
the water is too strong to swim
i wished id listened to him id still be here if i had
i can see every mistake she takes
its like watching myself dieing
before this watery hell delivered me to my fate
the date i died was 1778
oh god no not this time you shall not exspereince my fate
i see her splash
shes having such fun
there is no sunshineing down on us just blackened sky of rain above
the thunder rumbles the lightning flashes
quick a dase the waves are crashing
agenst the hell soaken rocks
i see a figuer long and soft
along from where i rest i see the figuer lay
i grasp her arms with my cold dead hands
and pull her strate to land
i rub her chest blow into her mouth
she coughs up water
i see fear in her eyes i stay standing at her side
dont fear me for i am kind
you saved me she said
i did now please go rest in your warm safe bed
ill come to see you everynight
my freind she smiles and pulls up her dress she walks home
i follow her to bed
i get on her bed lying next to her chest
so nice to here life beatting in her chest
now my spirit is free and i can rest
goodbye angel
now its my turn to thank thee for saving me .
- by Sakiya Seki Shina |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/07/2011 |
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- Title: At the lake lies a fate
- Artist: Sakiya Seki Shina
- Description: This poem is a poem of fate a warning awake to the senses of a girl who needs to be more careful less dangerus i no my spelling sucks and my grammer fails and my puncuation is nonexsistent this poem is for injoyment so dont let these minor issues disturb you blessed be.xxxxxxxxx
- Date: 08/07/2011
- Tags: down lake lies seacr
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Comments (2 Comments)
- launchpadmcquack13136 - 08/18/2011
- not gunna li. good idea for the poem, but no... you had to make it work, sorry, 2 outa 5.
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- vv7722 - 08/13/2011
- yes it probably would have been easier to read had you spell-checked it beforehand, but it's well done nonetheless ... Nice rhythm, great job telling the story smile 5/5
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