You

• Artist: cboo99
• Description: I had a bad day.The guy I had a crush on was also my bff. He came over to help me and his is pretty much what happened. After I said that he stared at me like I had gone nuts and said: "Really!?" We ended up going out.
  
  Yeah, I know it doesn't really rhyme, but who gives a crap?!?! Poetry does not have to rhyme.
  I thought I'd just point that out to all the people who look at the bad stuff and not the true meaning.
  
  I do know it's a not-so-great poem altogether, so criticize so I can fix it ^^.
• Date: 05/14/2011
• Tags: youu love sadness poem girlguy

I'm crying in my room and you come over
You say "What's wrong?"
I notice:You brought the CD's that hold my favorite song
You brought over my favorite candies and flowers
But that only made me cry harder.
I say "I've fallen deeply in love"
You say "With who???"
Then, I can't take it; I cry:
I'm in love...
With YOU!