What's wrong with me?

• Artist: Das Tier ist Mir
• Description: Been through a little bit of stuff.
• Date: 01/22/2011
• Tags: whats wrong with

I've come to the conclusion
That I'm under the delusion
That women want someone kind and caring

I do anything in my power to make them smile
And I think to myself that this happiness might last a while
But before I know it they've changed their mind and sent me on my way

And then I have to pretend
That I'm happy to just be their friend
While I'm beating myself up inside

I've been through love before
And have had my heart beaten battered and torn
Is it so much to ask for someone that will take care of me for once

I can't think of what I'm doing incorrect
That makes me seem far from perfect
What's wrong with me

Comments

[The Rogue Butler]

I have to say this poem was really interesting and I was sucked in at first verse. You have some talent and the fact that it is a true event makes it so much more recognizable
My man, trust me, I know what it is like to be loved and lost; but the ways of the world have very weird ways of toying with us, but in the end; fate brings us to that one person who we share our life with. Maybe it'll be years from now, maybe it'll be right around the corner, but it will happen, trust me smile