The Feelings of the Chords

• Artist: Shira Tachima
• Description: I wrote this to portray what i's like with someone who puts up a mask... ^^ they always act like everything is fine, happy as can be or neutral to the extreme, but deep down they have some things they'd rather not show or say ^^
  
  Can you guess the instrument I'm meaning in it? ^^ might be hard to guess though since I didn't give much information...
• Date: 01/22/2011
• Tags: feelings chords

The Feelings of the Chords

Strings are stung
Feelings are sung
Everywhere around
Mask the frown

No one will know
On with the show
Smile and wave
How to save?

Keep the smile
Through the mile
Someone asks
Put up the mask

Nothing is wrong
Hear the song?
Always fine
Not in a bind

Melodies played through
Everyone in view
Filling the room
In the hearts tomb

No way to think
It'll always sink
As strings are played
Throughout this day

Comments

[Shira Tachima]

Haha, you're right ^^ I did mean the violin. I know what you mean about the ending...I wasn't sure how to end it though ^^;

[Yutora]

The violin ? Random a** guess. It was nice, the only thing I didn't like is that you broke the rhyme at the end, it leaves a bitter taste behind (but that's just my opinion). Otherwise it was good.