I cant have you

• Artist: Hello_Anyely_Hi
• Description: this is a poem i wrote a few nights ago because of what i was feeling for reals so i hope u like it. ^.^ so here it goes....
• Date: 08/05/2010
• Tags: cant have

heart A few weeks ago i didnt know you. A few days ago i thaught of you as just a friend. A few minutes ago I decided i wanted to spend the rest of my life with you. And a few seconds ago i realized........i couldnt. So now i just dont know what to do. I felt like we had a conection,but now........i just feel pain,silence,sadness and dissapointment. And as many times as i blink........ill think of you. heart

Comments

[Silent ghost1]

cool poem

[Unicorn]

lov it i love both of them! XD 6 stars the other one is invisible lol XD

[Kagami Lawliet]

and again another stunning piece of literature. 4/5

[Rei Kuromaru]

This poem was awesome.You truly know how to capture the element of your emotions in your words.% stars all the way.

[Jinsoku Kage]

Nice. Four stars for the emotion and expression, you've exemplified them well. The only reason I didn't give you that last star is because of grammar and arrangement. Mostly grammar. Keep up the good work! :3

[iiDiNo-DaNish]

It's so cute! <3 This made my day.

[Sona The Eternal]

It's beautiful Shadow...wonderful I never knew you were a poet...P.S. can you check out my poem to please? It's called "No Regrets" Just search my user and click on the only one I have please comment! P.P.S UR AWESOME!!!!