Relay Race

• Artist: cantstopcrazy
• Description: if you didnt get it after reading its talking about the sun, and the end mentions the moon, and how they move across the sky like racers. their track the sky, observing those who observe them as they make their to the relay point, the horizon. please dont be upset if i spelled any words wrong or used the wrong one. im still working on that. please rate and comment.
• Date: 08/02/2010
• Tags: moon dawn racers time

First to start you gallantly race,
May you always do so while i am here.
The green light for songbirds to sing,
And the beginning of something new.
Travling steady across the sky,
Filling half the world with light,
And excitement for what the day has to hold.
High above us all, the center of its track,
You watch as we scurry about,
Adults to and from work,
Children outside enjoying your warmth.
Slowly you wave goodbye,
Sinking down just as quick as you rose
You give way to softer light,
A near match to dawns,
And fill the sky with apple blossoms.
You lie beneath our view,
But not without putting a spot light on your friend,
We settle down and watch
As a new racer take their place on your course,
Not afraid the the path is now dark,
New life awakes with its dawning.
Nearly matching your time exact,
The baton is passed back,
As you signal for the song birds to sing.
The gallantly racers of night and day,
May always run while i am here.
If ever a day when the relay is stopped,
It will be the one filled with fear.

Comments

[EgoLuv]

this is really gud i enjoyed the way u involved nature and how the rotations of human live.... maybe a bit more discriptions of trees and birds and wat not but it was really gud smile