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When i look deep into my mind i find nothing,
Not a memory of my past.
So when i ask myself where i find an answer,
There is just a vast ocean of fog,
For which answers lie but don't get revealed.
Bloodthirst grows in my stomach as i hear what has happened,
I start to focus on things that are very common.
I hide my evil smile when i feel like im about to go on a rampage,
But my teeth feel as though they are about to buldge out of my mouth,
For i imagine the taste of blood in my mind.
The night brings me comfort,
But not enough to roam under the moonlight.
The stars danse with joy,
But i cringe with envy,
I imagine myself in a tree looking at the moon.
I cryed that night thinking of my pain,
And i felt like i was going to scream.
I gripped my blankets hard as i thought possible,
And my fingers felt like they were bleeding with sorrow,
Yet i seemed to want the pain so i gripped even harder for a release.
Some of these things happen daily,
But others happen on certain occasions.
The more this happens the more i feel like im belonging more,
I start to feel that i can be like a normal person,
One that can fit in with the world.
- Title: Feelings
- Artist: Vastrix
- Description: Yes i know it doesn't rhyme you screwed up critics but as for you who like it thank you.
- Date: 07/15/2010
- Tags: feelings
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Comments (3 Comments)
- LassMichDichLieben - 07/31/2010
- It's beautiful. Just because it doesn't ryme doesn't mean it isn't wonderful. ^^ 5/5 Keep writing
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- D3a7h_G0d - 07/16/2010
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What do you know, you write!
And how well too.
The stanzas are well organised, and overall application of words is real good as well.
5 stars from me. ^^
I'd appreciate it if you wanted to check out some of mine. - Report As Spam
- Ichigo kuroku - 07/15/2010
- there r very few people that can write a poem that is so amazingly beautiful and it not rhyme...i envy you because this is one of those poemes and i can not do this even if my life depended on it. i have not words to express how impressed i am with this peom....i loved it
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