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Beautiful, majestic life
Permeates through all the dirt carcasses and grass
Breathes air into something so undeserving
So motionless
So empty
Skies melt, melt, melt
With lush whiteness, clouds
And deep, deep, intimate blue
The yellow blades of sunlight,
The swords of the angels
Slicing through such soft darkness
Before, it was only hollow void
Holding a single seed
That tore open the green tendrils,
Bled its green veins onto the ground
Yawning and stretching further, further, further,
Soon reaching to the clouds for help,
Burying precious sky-crystals under the soil
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But the devil’s match was lit then,
Immense fire broke from the core
Broke through the dirt walls
That held back all fury and flames.
- by QuantumCrayonsXxXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/06/2010 |
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- Title: No Redemption.
- Artist: QuantumCrayonsXxXx
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I'm not done with it.
So this is only part 1.
Normally, I have better syntax than this. Please comment! - Date: 06/06/2010
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Comments (4 Comments)
- QuantumCrayonsXxXx - 06/21/2010
- Thank you for the positive feedback ^_^
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- AngelLips96 - 06/15/2010
- i agree with cupcakes down there. it was spectacular!
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- OMJJ_CUPCAKES - 06/08/2010
- i really don't know what that kittyanimefreak girl was talking about. That was a beautiful poem! ahh your really great.
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- kittyanimefreak - 06/08/2010
- its good a bit confuzing remember even if you have detailed words they have to make sense. good through!
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