Neutral Existance

• Artist: ChrystalAngelous
• Description: Theres no need to explain things that common people don't understand. Take it as you want.
• Date: 05/25/2010
• Tags: neutral existance

A dozen reasons why they tell me to go away.
A milllion reasons why I continue to stay.
The hundreds of tears that drenched my pillow at night,
the dreams that took over my lovesick mind.

I scream internally.
I pound my fists against the wall.
I bite my lip,
but I suffer alone.

When will the time come when I can look away?
Where there is no anguish? No pain.
When desire does not cloud all rational thought and life does not painstakingly go on and on.
My soul is weak, my will nonexistant.
I can't fight.
I cannot withstand the weight of the burden I've created for myself.

You're making my existance heaven being with you,
you're making my fragile life hell.

And now, I spend the rest of my life with you.
A common blood bond linking us together,
it is not our destiny but our sick fate.

Comments

[ChrystalAngelous]

Thank you hun^^ And yes, unfortunately I do have a bit of a superiority complex that I need to work on. And I like the fact that you drew your own conclusion and connnected it to incest. But in this case it deals with a lover of sorts and pregnancy, neither of the people in this poem stay they love each other anymore but now their stuck with each other by default.

[Idiosyncratic Quirk]

As for the poem, it's easy to understand. Obligation, heartache (and it doesn't always need to apply to a lover), hopeful but barely, the pleasure of ones company, and in the last stanza - incest. I don't know if that's what you are going for but when you say "a common blood bond", you're communicating a family connection and when you say "our sick fate" it just adds on to that allusion you made.

[Idiosyncratic Quirk]

Wow, your description makes it seem as if you have a superiority complex. If that was intentional - bravo. If not, read it over before you post next time.