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And I’ll wrap my fingers
Around this rose garden residing
In the fairy tales of my convoluted mind
Watching paint peel and fall to dusty
Corners of places I no longer
Tread. Watch me as the flower
Petals fall and my hopes and dreams
Shatter unto shards of rotten wood
As I, dance the night away under soft moonlight
As the sun dies among us, here
Here in this place without sound.
Let me show you how I’ll walk the
Narrow pathways of past and present
And listen to the sound of waves
Crashing along distant shores while
I remain in meadows contained within
This stagnant room of curdled milk and ink
Stains that float along the floorboards.
I’ll doodle life stories on fogged up
Windows made of stick figures and
Sad faces that melt with the condensation
Of our breaths intertwining between the
Cartons of chinese food and the heady
Sound of the rain against the sills of yesterday.
I’ve let the dirt pile up in the flower
Beds, the dreary drawl of lemon lips
And misunderstood communications
In which you and I have gotten lost
In the typewriters of tomorrow and
The books lost to the eternal shelves of time.
It’s nigh past midnight and I’d forgotten
The necessity that tomorrow must
Inadvertently be another day where
The cows will low in distant fields
And the ebb and flow of what I’d
Wanted to do with my routine of
Tea and thought and pondering was
Buried beneath the rubble as I discovered
The Mayans through the bloodied
Geometric shapes of raindrops on
Your windowpane. I’ll let you feel the way
As I lose myself in sofa cushions and
Bits of newspaper that serve to remind
Me of the black and white of things cast
To dull shades of licorice and ivory
While gumdrops hang from the ceiling
As I acknowledge the fact
That there is no such thing as tomorrow.
These sunflowers I’d sprung from
The recesses of this deserted closet
Have misled their disposition for they
Remain in the cluttered confines of what
I used to know and think and feel
While your spider webs clog the airways
And pump empty kernels into my not so beating heart.
I’ll still listen to the pitter patter of your rain storm
Even while I wish, I wish that
The small grass clouds would make me feel
As at home as the clouded grass that serves as land
But I fear I got lost in the snippets of old
Magazine clippings that echo in convoluted clouds as I
Stumble on memories of pavement trips and
Broken photo albums of restaurant days.
What made me ask you why the ground was
More sky than sky was ground as the colored
Pencils descended along my puzzled
Life that feels so much more like oatmeal
Than of the crystal you so fawned over?
Perhaps I’ll never know past
The half eaten bowl of fruit loops and
Frosted flakes gathering mold on the kitchen table
As the dust piles half an inch thick on
The dreams and hopes I’d thought I’d dream
From the ignorance of a brilliant mind.
This is the ignorance of a brilliant mind,
I thought I’d let you know.
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- by fallenleeves |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/20/2010 |
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- Title: The Brilliant Mind
- Artist: fallenleeves
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Written for the fall-out of a year and a half relationship.
See if you can get all the meanings ;0 - Date: 05/20/2010
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Comments (2 Comments)
- fallenleeves - 05/24/2010
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Oh my .... thank you very much.
You're words just honestly made my day, truly.
Haha, it is indeed a rather er, emotionally charged piece, if you will.
I really appreciate such an in-depth comment though, really : D
Made my week actually ;0 - Report As Spam
- Idiosyncratic Quirk - 05/21/2010
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Oh my God. This has to be THE best poem I've read in a very long time from someone youthful and still living.
So... many... fantastic... lines. Just... Good God! This is excellent. I mean... Too excellent!
It flows perfectly and is SO expressive without saying: you broke my heart you son of a b***h and I'm sad about it.
<.< I have so much respect for you because of this... and I have no idea who you are.
This is brilliant. 10/5... but since I can't do that, a five out of five will suffice. - Report As Spam