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• Artist: tea loaf
• Description: Artsy dark poem. Inspired by the epic/novel Identical.
• Date: 02/07/2010
• Tags: title

_______Darkness - ________________________________________________-____I
Fades into color- ________________________________________________________fall
____dizzying
__mixture-
___of-
defeat.-
_horrors
__haunting
___hallucinate-
_______sunsets-
into _____darkness

Shadows await me everyday.- ____________________________________________while
____walking corpses ____________________________________________________shadows
____poker____faces__________________________________________________-_____walk
____show_no_glee.-
____bitter _remorse-
____shunning___me-
sometimes___I_just_feel_like
____________________________want
________________________________to
__________________________________die

___l
___l

____my_____from it______________reflections of past
shield__eyes______beautiful, blinding______________lives. _________________-_____Away

Comments

[tea loaf]

Thanks. I appreciate the feedback.

[ILikeBabyBarPoo]

Oh,that helps understand it a little more.well it's still good so keep up the good work.

[tea loaf]

The poem is read like this:
Darkness fades into color. Dizzying mixture of defeat. Horrors, haunting, hallucinate. Sunsets into darkness. Shadows await me every day. Walking corpses. Poker Faces. Show no glee; bitter remorse, shunning me. Sometimes I just feel like I want to die. Shield my eyes from it. Beautiful, blinding reflections of past lives. I fall while shadows walk Away. I walk away.

[tea loaf]

In the case of it being hard to read, I apologize. The structure was different typed up, but since Gaia prohibits multiple spacing I had to use various underscores. The poem its self spells out K I L L, while the words off to the side are thoughts added to the main poem. Each dash by the words off to the side mean for them to be read seperate.

[ILikeBabyBarPoo]

XD wow i'm confused,its not bad but its just a little hard to read.