I think i am falling for you

• Artist: meet ur angel
• Description: this is for my chrush
  funny part is, he will never see it.
• Date: 01/20/2010
• Tags: think falling

thoughts of love fill my head
as i lay on my bed
i dream about a boy
who fills me with joy

black hair, pink lips
thin arms, skinny hips
although still perfect to me
he is the only one i see

I may stand in a crowded room
when thoughts of him bloom
Nothing comes to my attention
i do not talk while in conversation

I love him
the word like doesnt even reach the brim
he is my superman
and i am his biggest fan

my heart feels so fuzzy when i am near
i feel as though i am cheered
his perfect smile
makes life worthwhile

i think i am falling for this person
it only seems to worsen
the question may be
will he fall for me

but even i know the answer to this question
to my sadness, no is my confession
he is to perfect for me
but we will have to see

if i can win his heart
or just a part
either will do
but my chances are few

To micheal, i think i am falling for you.
(if you wish to use this another name might be nessisary)

Comments

[meet ur angel]

lol, thank you for the tips, i should have probably thought about that while i was writing. See, i wake up at 3 a.m and i am half dead when i write my poems. I just wake up and say to myself "I need to write this" otherwise i will go crazy

[nbetweener]

First things first: if you're going to write, learn the tools. (i.e. learn to spell, and which/witch words to/too/two use when). just because it's poetry doesn't mean that it doesn't have to make sense. "the question may be"?? no, the question IS. don't settle for something that doesn't sound right just to satisfy meter or rhyme. That's when the real work often begins, fighting with the language to say what you want to say so it will sound right, and be correct. I do feel for ya tho, kid.

[Pichara-kun]

Don't give up just yet. You still have a chance. You might not know but he might be into you too and he might have read this.