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I am tough and my heart is cold
But you never believe what you've been told.
I feel you're pain and know it well
But you you couldn't catch me if I fell.
I am rough, I know it's true.
I've hurt everyone, especially you
I ask forgiveness for my sin
But you stop me short, once again.
You come to me and hold me tight
You tell me that I was right.
You soak me in your blood and tears
But I do not pull back, I don't shift gears.
Never shall I leave your side
For I know those cuts you that cannot hide
But you won't see mine behind my mask
For I will not remove it, even if you ask..
- Title: Violet
- Artist: tealcat01
- Description: Heh...it says it all...
- Date: 11/22/2009
- Tags: violet
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Synayo - 11/04/2010
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The concept of hiding behind a mask is so old, but it's still intriguing in this poem.
Definitely a 5/5
I'm not quite sure why, but I really like the "I don't shift gears" part.
Maybe because it's uncommon wording?
It makes me think of Guns and Horses by Ellie Goulding - Report As Spam
- Jess369 - 01/21/2010
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Hm...I'll tell ya in a pm.
And psh. Yeah. Right. - Report As Spam
- tealcat01 - 01/19/2010
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Tres Interessant...what message do you perceive pray tell
And thank you of corse, but i cannot compete with yours - Report As Spam
- Jess369 - 01/12/2010
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I love this one, and I hate it at the same time.
I guess I should say it's beautifully written, but the message scares me faintly.
Of course 5/5 (: - Report As Spam
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