- The beating of my heart seems to blow my cover as I stand beside the open door, I catch the glimpse of fallen objects. Suddenly I feel a heavy blow against my ribs. Collapsing against the door way I know my life is in grave danger, the need to breath overwhelms me. Strong hands hold me down as a alcohol ridden cloth is forced upon my mouth. Blackness welcomes me as I am enveloped in a deep heavy sleep.
- Title: DANGER 2
- Artist: Akorn23
- Description: not safe in any way
- Date: 10/01/2009
- Tags: danger
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- MeanyAllysin - 10/12/2009
- too cliche come up with a storyline that no one has used before...more figurative language less obvious less meaningless phrases used often that give too much away so simply...3/5
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