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It's a long road i see something at the end.
A person I think.
Is it somebody i want to see?
Is it just another back staber.
I miss you.
I love you.
I just want to see your face.
But if your going to be another one of them.
Just leave and don't come back.
I wish i could see you right now.
As long as you don't hurt me.
I know that you probably wouldn't do that.
But i never can know.
I've been stabbed before.
Right in the heart.
Not by you i hope not by you.
But by another one of them the dream killers.
They think i dont have feelings.
I'm another human being.
I'm not a rag doll.
I have feeling's i just don't share them.
I get made fun of.
I wish i could just lay under a rock.
Forever i would rot away.
Nobody would care.
I hope you do.
If you really cared why aren't you under here with me?
Thats the real question.
I know im not ideal.
I know im not the best at everything.
You could have atleast liked me for me.
Not becaus of pitty.
Pitty that's another thing for another day.
I'mgoing to rot under that same rock you left me under good night.
Good night forever.
- Title: Let me rot...
- Artist: iKiraVsL
- Description: A story about the girl that killed me and just kept hurting me after i died....
- Date: 09/12/2009
- Tags: sademodead
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ProfessorKC - 09/23/2009
- Spelling's off a bit and it's a little repetitive, but not in a comfotable easy to read way. The idea is sound and the theme. Need to work on your presentation but practice will take care of that for you. Keep at it smile
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- iStrong Sakura - 09/13/2009
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Awww that made me feel sad. D:
You got real talent.
It's a really good poem. smile - Report As Spam