Fallen Angel

• Artist: Demonic Decay
• Description: An Angel that fell from grace, that was caught and hung for a masquerade amusement. In the end she dies and becomes an angel again.
• Date: 08/26/2009
• Tags: fallen angel

Sweet little angel falling fast
Why did you think you could last
The day is not yet young
But you have already been hung

The play is set
Curtains won't fall
Noose is the bet
This will be the last ball

Masked phantoms that dance
All stop and glance
Cruel laughter is shown
Like a cold wind blown

Wings been ripped
You are stripped
The rope is tight
Your last flight

Comments

[Demonic Decay]

Thanks, Insanely Sane. I'll edited out. =3

[iinsanely Sane]

I dont agree, I understood it fine. I loved every bit except the end. The end made all the excellent flows and good rhymes be put to waste, the dark and lark rhyme was too forced. I'd suggest you edit that, but besides that, I liked it.

[ProfessorKC]

Does not fit into the description, you need to expand it a bit. I'd never know what the poems was about without the descruption and that's not good.