Eyes

• Artist: lexi24_4
• Description: I wrote it because of someone I fell for turned out to be a liar
• Date: 08/10/2009
• Tags: eyes

Your eyes
What color are they?
Are they coal black?
Are they chocolate brown?
Because everytime I look in your eyes
All I see is
Lies

Comments

[Kishin_Mistress]

i agree with ichigo ^^ its a really short poem, so i wasnt expecting much, but then i saw you had conveyed alot in in that small bit! 5 stars for sure!

[Ichigo kuroku]

WOW!! that was so deep and you are able to convey everything you wanted to say in so few words! i really think that you have a talent to write poems and i can't wait to read more! smile