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If I could write you a love song,
Sing right to your stormy blue eyes.
Maybe invite you,maybe I'd
Excite you, somehow bring you to sighs.
Should I sing of your wondrous charms?
Your sturdy legs, your well-toned arms?
Pert nose perched over knowing smile?
Harmonize with your deep blue eyes?
(A rhyme that uses lovely thighs
Would fit but, hey, why scandalize?
It's hard enough to keep it clean
Because of all you've come to mean.) lol
So I'll dwell on your loving heart,
Your nature,sweet,would be a start
Your hair like silk and cut to there,
Have men and boys alike to stare.
Looks are fine as they start the game,
Years from now you won't be the same.
You will always be beautiful
Brushed as you are with my heart full.
- Title: If I Could Write U A Love Song
- Artist: davidl8ly
- Description: love song for an imaginary lover
- Date: 07/22/2009
- Tags: could write love song
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Comments (1 Comments)
- mirachan3 - 08/10/2009
- I like the structure and the rhyme scheme except you lose it at the end. I find it creative, and original. You did a great job, so I give it a 4.
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