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Seeing seas of jade
spying skies of Grey
smelling salt in the air
feeling faltering winds through my hair
the storm is so strong
this feeling feels wrong.
The clouds continue spinning.
the storm will be worse, i fear, this is just the beginning.
hearing seagulls cry
seeing fear i every sailors eye
wooden docks begin to creak and rock
this is something that wont just stop.
thunder in the distance i hear.
every strike of lightning causing more fear
now in the eyes of everyone.
god knows how long til' the storm is gone.
The sea begins to rise with a fight.
the island wont be safe though this night,
Our leaders the ones who protect us
are gone dead by the strong gust.
The ships, tied to the docks
slap into the island, being destroyed by the rocks.
I ran for the shelter created in case of this tragedy.
there are barely any people, twenty of them and just me.
An idea was created to destroy the beast.
to give it flesh, human meat.
No one offered themselves right away.
one must go the others will stay.
My name was offered since Ive always been alone
I resisted fear in my face shown.
two strong, tall men grabbed me.
they plan to throw me over, into the deep blue sea.
As i was carried to the shore.
i wish the storm was here no more.
i stared into the pink sky slowly turning to purple becoming the night
my body starts to shake as i tried to shake away the fright.
the men hurriedly let me go.
as a twisted wind of insanity begin to show.
I ran over to my home, the only place i felt safe.
if this was all i dream, i wish it were the case.
I closed my eyes trying to wish it all away.
i opened them with force. the demon did stay.
cracking noises i heard through my door
i assumed, half the island must not be here anymore.
since the island is half made of wood.
i want this all to end. if i could control it i would!
A strike of courage ran through my mind.
im gunna try and stop it. i held my fist in a bind.
i opened the door with force, spotting the the wind created beast.
i ran to it with force. standing on the grass. i felt this thing, i could defeat.
The wind came towards me carrying the planks from the dock.
i could still hear some from it, creak and rock.
I ran towards it hoping to make it go away.
My stomach turned as i closed my eyes., why wont it leave? i don't want it to stay!
The wind came to me from behind!
the beast carried me i felt i could touch the clouds in the sky!
i screamed in agony as the dock boards attacked me.
im not going to exist anymore. im not going to be.
another board hit me my legs lost its feeling.
my life! my soul! for its collection it must be stealing!
i saw one more board getting closer to my face.
i tried to stop it! as it hit me i felt i was going to be out of trace.
i closed my eyes as i prepare to die.
i wish i go be on the ground instead of the sky.
a sharp piece of wood struck me again.
this time my life as i knew it came to a painful end.
- by Aliethiara |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2009 |
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- Title: Through my eyes {poem & story}
- Artist: Aliethiara
- Description: its about a girl who lives on an island. the people on the island she lives with dont know what a hurricane is and the girl tries to stop it herself trying to protect the island.. YOU SEE IT THROUGH THE GIRLS EYES its more of a poem/ story.
- Date: 07/17/2009
- Tags: throughmyeyes
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Comments (7 Comments)
- blujester - 07/20/2009
- cool
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- RockNRollChick13 - 07/19/2009
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its long. But I think that its pretty amazing. I love it. Keep it up. =D
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- Kjeldoran0 - 07/17/2009
- It's a well-constructed piece of work and you should be proud of it... I'm only going to give it a 4.5/5 though because, while you've used poetry rather than prose to tell a story and tell it well, your rhyme scheme is a little irregular, there are moments when you try just a little to hard to make a rhyme, and sometimes your meter is funky. Other than that, though, I beleive you;ve done a GREAT job. ^_^
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- Shikagirl13 - 07/17/2009
- Really interesting and cool. 5/5
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- JerardsUser - 07/17/2009
- I leve it
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- ENTROPY SOUP - 07/17/2009
- Its pretty but creppy awsome if anything 5/5
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- Noah DeFehr - 07/17/2009
- I hate you. biggrin
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