universal

• Artist: Paper-Switchblade
• Description: um..ya so jsut randomly i was pissed at the world, and i found my friend crying and when he looked up at me and i saw a tear fall off his cheek, and thought it was so unfair some of us suffer more then we should. so poof crappy poem. sorry for the story, but it kinda helps the mood.
• Date: 07/17/2009
• Tags: universal

In a world of flaws,
the closest thing we have to perfection,
the only thing in our world thats whole,
is a teardrop,
reflecting the hate,
and love,
of our brutal existence.

Comments

[Lunar_Rose12]

it good um.. well as she said the story did help a little the peom get's a 3 by it's self and he story get 's a 2 so u get a 5 altogether.

[Paper-Switchblade]

okay i also hav 3 modified versions of this. if anybody wants to see them you can message me.

[Alrecia]

The story helps the poem smile