My tears

• Artist: DMNfox
• Description: ok this is my first submitting a poem. i just learned how to do it too. i did it by myself i didn't get any help i didn't even know i had it in me XD tell me what ya think =D
• Date: 07/14/2009
• Tags: tears

The rain falls as I cry in pain
I cry and cry for the rain will not end
The ocean grows more as my heart is in pain

I can't stop crying as my heart aches with dread
Till I find how to end these tears of mine
The ocean shall grow and the rain drops hard
My tears will forever haunt me with pain

THE END

Comments

[Perfect Mistress Hazuki]

very deep i luv it. hey how do u put stuff on here?? i want to put the prologue to the book i'm making.