Fear

• Artist: Ninja Heroix
• Description: A very simple poem i wrote in 5th grade,kinda lame,but i entered it anway
• Date: 07/08/2009
• Tags: fear

Fear crying

Fear is a thing,a very weird thing
People fear heights,people fear mice
People fear monsters,people fear lice
People fear darkness,people fear light
People fear water,people fear sight
People fear cats and dogs
Horses and fog
Smokers and snakes
Fire even cakes exclaim
But what
I think,what everyone really fears.................
Is fear itself .........

Comments

[z4pper]

Veeeery deep. It's a good poem. Nice rhythm and rhyme. It gets you thinking, and it's based on something that pertains to everyone! No mispellings and correct grammar and punctuation (Which REALLY made my day). Awesome job! definitely a 5!!!

[ichie-ichiko]

FDR much?