Leaf in the wind.

• Artist: kenzeemawsh
• Description: D: just something random i thought about.
  it's not good but oh well.
  this is good to me.
• Date: 07/08/2009
• Tags: leaf wind

i'm sitting here alone.
it's cold.
i can't stop thinking about you
i dont know what to do.
you dont even know i exist
you walk pass me like the invisible
person i am
i secretly love you.
you just dont know it.
Here, i'm still sitting alone
and you're gone.
just like a leaf in the wind.

Comments

[Sugar Quill Drops]

Yeah, it's far too cliche for my tastes;
But at least you can spell, whereas many other on here don't seem to be able to do that.
2/5 stars.

[kenzeemawsh]

I rather know it's not well written.
I thought of it on the spot.

[1python64]

Poem of a cliche' feeling.
Inconspicuous, yet well written (somewhat).

2/5