Do you love me?

• Artist: GothicvampirequeenLuna
• Description: first line i did not mean to sorta take it from the Jo Bros plus whole diffrent melody (maybe Il sing it and put it on Youtube
• Date: 06/30/2009
• Tags: love original

When you look me in the eyes
you cant say to me that you love me but
you cant say you don’t what’s wrong with you
what happened to the bond we shared
what used to be a new black shining rose
Is now a withering daisy... (Hold) (chorus)
Guitar/base solo
What’s wrong with you, I cant bear to loose you
your my "It" my love de' jour (hold)
Now it's now it's... Now it's ...Gone (hold for long time)
but I wont give up without a fight
cause deep down your still mine
Your still my "it" my Love de' jour my everything
everyday I love you more & more
(chores)
Now you know x3 that I... Love you more than
you love your new what you call boo
what do you see in him that’s not in me
I’m better then him bytimes 4 (hold)
"Sure you are", you say but I know you really mean it
deep down In side you still want me
well baby just come back to me
Chorus

Comments

[Miku~Noaru]

This is so. . .there's a lot of emotion here, for sure. I think you have a very interesting love life. Um, I hope you and this person have resolved things. It would be oo, jeez, a little over ten years since you've written this. I wonder what your life is like now, I hope it's good. I don't know how you rhymed some of these? I see you have a lot of emotion here, but there's still a lot missing. I will give this a. . . 2/5.

[Lilith Celestine17]

This is so sad, and romantic and sweet.