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There was a sad little girl in the park,
she wore a pink dress and sat in the dark
people passed by, but didn't notice a thing
to tell you the truth it isn't surprising
One day I decided to approach the young girl
Her hair was dirty and full of ugly curls
Though her dress was still as beautiful as before
Its something I ponder and simply adore
I started with a simple "hello"
She answered back looking at her own shadow
We talked for a long time for a long time indeed
Then I gave her a cupcake "Its not something I need"
"But I think you deserve it" I answered
Then something happened amazing! She spread out her wings
She was an angel this whole time! I heard the bells ring
Then she flew up in to the air I looked at her go
Because there are always some things you need to know
The End
- by rafieraf1232 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/26/2009 |
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- Title: The Pink Dress
- Artist: rafieraf1232
- Description: My poem doesn't have any pics or music I just like it simple :)
- Date: 06/26/2009
- Tags: pink dress
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Comments (3 Comments)
- rafieraf1232 - 04/13/2010
- Okay don't mind the "but I think you deserve it I answered" I'll do better next time
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- imaustin55 - 06/28/2009
- take out the "'but i think you deserve it' I answered" part...its already understood in the line before about the character not needing the cupcake that he/she was guna give the little girl the cupcake...and that line doesnt run smoothly with the other lines....but other than that....diffidently a great poem...the guy before this comment ( Jeyrin ) took the words right out of my mouth smile 5/5
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- Jeyrin - 06/27/2009
- very nice. I think it's beautiful and very inspiring. People need to learn that you can find beauty in just about anything, if only you take the time to look for it. 5/5. Rate back?
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