Chains Hold me Up

• Artist: DehHiddenAngel
• Description: Here is just a poem i made up!!...hope u like it!...Its about how even though it hurts you want to and have to go through with it and mostly about how memories hurt even the good ones every time she closed her eyes she saw all of her memories and a lot were painful to watched and she had had a tough life and how the chains hold her high enough to get away and mostly she is imagening everything, and she wants her life to get better and she wants to stop hurting all the time...
• Date: 06/24/2009
• Tags: chains hold

The chains hold me up high

They hurt really bad

I take a deep sigh

This may seem sad

But i want them to stay

as i hang there in the dark

i close my eyes and pray

i'm sitting in that park

were we used to play

i open my eyes to see it again

i close my eyes one last time

i mouth the words Amen

because if it weren't for the chains

i could have been dead

i guess it could have been worse

i cry in the cellar

I Can't take it anymore

I don't want to hear death

i don't want to see pain

i want it to be peaceful

As i hang there by the chains....

Comments

[Kaiuc00]

love it the only thing i see wrong is your not constintent(sp) in your style you change from ryhming to free form