Moonlight

• Artist: Little isis123
• Description: This is my first writing, hope you enjoy!
• Date: 06/17/2009
• Tags: moonlight

Moonlight shines galore
Romance in the evening skies
But murderers smile

Comments

[Deadlylight6]

i noticed u tried to go for a haiku. if thats the case, the last line needs to be 5 syllables. but here u have 6. i suggest replacing murderers with "killers" overall i like the idea of having a romantic night for couples but also a beautiful night for a kill or two. very nice.