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You look at me
through glazed eyes
You had to pay the fee
for all my lies
I saw you pass
into another world
You were made out of glass
not to be broken or hurled
Death comes on the fingertips of dawn
Creeping slowly till it gets its prey
Then you are gone
Preplacing my happiness with dismay
When I lose you
the world seems to die
The flowers never grew
again to see the sky
You slipped into the void
with a smile on your face
thinking you had destryoed
my very trace
The pain was to much to hold
It had to be let out one way
Then I felt cold
And heard someone say
There you go
I looked down at my chest
There was a red flow
By then I had guessed
I fell to the floor with a thud
Not breathing anymore
I lay on the floor in my own blood
soaking me to the core
The pain too much to bear
I slowly let go
Totally unaware
of the woe
I caused
others to feel
Their lives pause
to believe the unreal
to believe the unreal
- Title: Beliving the Unreal
- Artist: Koolkatus
- Description: This poem is about a girl's bf dying and she is sad and is regretting it when suddenly she dies too...
- Date: 06/09/2009
- Tags: beliving unreal
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Epic Kittehsaurus - 06/16/2009
- It is a truly good poem. It tells a story...a powerful one, at that. It gives so much emotion and feeling in it biggrin
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- Drunken Aunt Coral - 06/11/2009
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This is good, I like it alot. It's very depressing but in a good way. You should be proud that you are able to create such a strong impact on readers.
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- BloodyLaughter - 06/09/2009
- I love it. Its passionate and completely filled with emotion. And your description of it tells all.
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- Haylyn73096 - 06/09/2009
- sad, but nicely done
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