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Im thrown in a pit of dispair
Darker than the nights sky
Pain is new best friend
misery walks beside me
feel no emotions
no matter how deep i cut
what am i doing
they call it depression
but i call it a black hole
when will crawl out?
will i come out hole?
mY eyes scream for help
but all they see is a girl
- by seductive1 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/01/2009 |
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- Title: THE DARKEST PIT
- Artist: seductive1
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- Date: 06/01/2009
- Tags: mind depression
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Comments (1 Comments)
- DoubleMintTwins18 - 06/06/2009
- depressing. I feel the pain in the poem though. It brings me in. Very good. But, i dont feel a rhythum. And a few spelling mistakes. Good luck in the voting. 4/5 Please rate and comment my poems! Thanks. :]
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