Drowning

• Artist: NaomiShadow
• Description: I've had some pretty good feedback on this on my dA account. So hope you all like it. ^_^
• Date: 05/31/2009
• Tags: drowning asphyxiated breate drifting dying

I can't breathe

All my oxygen

Has been used up

I'm

just

drifting

away

From everything

And everyone

But most especially

You

You caused this

It's your fault

I'm drowning

Asphyxiated

And all you can do

Is say 'I'm sorry'

Oh yeah?

Well, I know for one

That you're not sorry

Otherwise, why don't you help

I'm drowning

Dying

But maybe somehow

Through it all

I can find the will to

Breathe

Comments

[xxI_CaSaDiVa_Ixx]

wow this is beautiful i happen to know some corporates on the writing side and they r always looking for the next big thing have u ever considered writing as a career if so contact me and ill see what i can do for you!!!!

[XxMonsterous MeganxX]

this is amazing. i absolutely love this! great poetry. and so true too. i can definitely relate.

[ForeverYours13]

I absolutely love this! It's so amazing! smile