the monster i became

• Artist: hot club1
• Description: i wrote this when i was down and sad about my life
• Date: 05/27/2009
• Tags: monster became

I fell through the dark
As if i was nothing
Not even a whisper in the air
My voice was blind
What did i do to deserve this
The pain u put me through
I feel so week
How come i was the one
Am i nothing than a un written letter
A note un read
A song un sang
The monster i became
Arent i saposed to be a friend
Who am i
A blank letter
I was write

The monster i have become................

Comments

[vampiric_alchemist #2]

2/5, you have some grammatical errors while at the same time I believe I've read something very very similiar, maybe it was a song. Also the tittle doesn't hold too much significance with the story, not even a symbolic significance, looks more like a random name just randomly made up. Sorry thats just my point of view, if you don't like this smal review delete it. I believe if someone posts something to the arena they should make 100% sure its error free.

[Ice Heart Akari]

i just therew up

[Delete56580984659]

oh my god this sucks so bad it mack me look so hot

[xxemily1542xx]

This is discutsting.
=.=
disapointment.
No.
I've seen a 6 yearr old do this better. For real.
turned me off.
1/5

[Chaydna]

You have been listening, Three Days Grace - Animal I Have Become, and got the idea... right?... 1/5

[Taydna]

EW, you just turned me off. 1/5