H.I.M.

• Artist: sweet_kiwi-xo
• Description: i wrote this for my bf a long time ago
  its how i feel about him...
  
• Date: 05/10/2009
• Tags: love forgoten

when i'm with him my hearts stops,
and when he goes away it breaks because he's going far away,
and when he smiles i fall into a gaze,
but what i love the most is when he says my name,
because then,
and only then,
do i know every thing's going to be O.K.

Comments

[ThrilIer]

Sort of makes no sense at the end.
When he says your name you knwo everythings going to be ok?
Uhh,.. I don't really get it. I mean, like was there lots of fights? or something? not a question I need an answer for. But try not to confuse the reader as much gonk ...

[musicchic2012]

wow thats really sweet!! love it!! <3 5/5

[Sue GAlA]

that is soo sweet!