Dreaming of Nightmares

• Artist: J_StringZ
• Description: Poem I wrote in my 4th period notebook. I'm writing it here so I can get opinions before I say it in front of the class. The teacher seems to like it, but she's the teacher, she likes everything that has to do with students working. Oh yea the stanza that all starts with W's... That wasn't really intended. Please, if you don't like it, just rate it as you want and move on. No reason for hate comments.
• Date: 05/05/2009
• Tags: dreaming nightmares scary freaky micheal

Welcome to my dream
Where your happiness is converted
Whether it's clean
Whether it's perverted

You dream of having millions of dollars
I change it into sailing through hellish waters
On that big, brand new boat
That you got with all that cash
I can take what you want most
And have it bite you in the a**

Ha ha ha! I laugh at your demise
You're confused
You try an eye for an eye
But you lit the fuse

You detonated your bomb
You ended your life
But somehow you live on
Until I stuck you with a knife

I've taken your wants right before your eyes
I took your desires and made them fears
You're an inch from insanity, you wake up and realize
You've been dreaming of nightmares

Comments

[Sherlock Houses]

XD
The original Michael Myers movie (was it Halloween?) had something with knives and stabbing in it ^.^
Awesome poem.

[J_StringZ]

What the heck o.o The tags were supposed to have Micheal Myers but Myers went pewf

[x XBliss Wasnt EnoughX x]

:0 bitchen! its sad, yet so true in so many ways

[Elisyma]

That's kinda scary.. BUT I LOVE IT biggrin 500000000000000/5
Why is one of the tags Micheal?