What do I do?

• Artist: crzyJap008
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• Date: 05/03/2009
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What do I do?
When my resources are gone
What do I do?
When I have nothing to prove
What do I do?
When you've run out of patience

What do you do?
When I've finally got the nerve
What do you do?
When I've shown how I feel

Are my questions pointless?
Are you even listening?
Are you down?
To be with me.

Do you hear me?
Do you understand?
Do you want me?
As much as i want you.

I've run out of patience!
I know you'll say yes!
I bet that you're get lonely!
Don't worry I am too.

What do you do?
when the one that you love,
Just shruggs and walks away

WHAT DO YOU DO WHEN I SAY I LOVE YOU?

Comments

[Eclairl]

its a really good poem could ya please vote and comment one of my poems?

[crzyJap008]

PLEASE COMMENT

[emeraldpuppy9]

its pretty good,
i think that was a bit overdoing the questions tho...
but that could just be for emphasis
and i noe how that feels XP
4/5 =]

[If No One Will Listen]

Pretty good, but it probably would be better if it were longer. Nonetheless, pretty good. 4/5 biggrin