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4/5/09 - As fate would have it
Imagine me,
Prancing in a field of daises,
basking a ray of sunshine,
on a summers day,
soaking in the sadness of the angels tears,
as they fall somberly apon the field of daises.
STOP!
WHAT ARE YOU DOING!
You just let me invade your mind!
the most precious thing you can hold and own!
the one thing that no one is supposed to be able to take from you.
LISTEN TO THE VOICES!
wait,
the voices are telling me something,
their telling me,
THEY DONT EXIST!
So why are we listening,
to something that,
even to itself,
it doesn't exist?
I don't quite know,
I don't think anyone really knows,
I just know one thing,
I managed to get you to think,
and listen,
to something that doesn't exist,
if thats possible....
- by rocko11091 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/12/2009 |
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- Title: 4/5/09 - As fate would have it
- Artist: rocko11091
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Description:
The beginning of my Nat'l Poetry Month poems. Enjoy.
As Always, I request that anyone leaving a comment include a bit of constructive criticism, ie. Enjoyed the flow of the poem, try including some better imagery...etc etc... - Date: 04/12/2009
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