a dream

• Artist: love_hate_magic_maj
• Description: two girls in these beautiful gowns are trying to find something important and they swim deeper and deeper, until they are having a hard time. then they just drift off. dont be to mean in your comments please, i tried! i would appreciate any comments of improvemnt tips! thnx. hope u like[d] it!
• Date: 04/10/2009
• Tags: dream water girls swimming drowning

I saw a face
Along with lace
Amoung a dream
Flowing like a stream
She was there with me
In beautiful gowns
That match our frowns
Watching them all
As we fall
Deeper, deeper we go
Even though
The pain is seering
Our vision is smearing
We're about to drown
There's not a sound
Except for my scream
Feeling my undoing seam
Our lives will be up in a flash
It's like there's a big slash
Going through my heart
Or maybe a dart
We dont feel sad
Nor do we feel mad
Just want it to end
So we dont defend
We drift off, drift off
As everthing stops

Comments

[love_hate_magic_maj]

it was a dream.. hello?

[Fantastic Nightmares]

Swimming? Finding something important? Gowns? Darts? What is this, Titanic? No seriously. Why were two girls swimming on gowns? And exactly where were they swimming?

[love_hate_magic_maj]

thnx for reading my poem! xd im not emo or goth by the way its just how i feel.