love or never ?

• Artist: amen phath
• Description: umm, if it is bad, please just tell me you need to improve, im still kinda learing english from germany, ^.^ thanks, ummm this is how i am expressing my life rite now. =]
• Date: 03/31/2009
• Tags: love never

would you tremble if i touched you?
would u die for the one you love?
yes i know im hard,
but i love you as much as she do.
i kno im not perfect,
am i in too deep?
once u will forget her, but as may a part will still be in.
i kno how hard I may be, but as for her, she have perfumed hearts.
show me what love is, haven't got a clue,
tell me how you felt,
all i want is the truth.
if you wanna hurt me, hurt me with the truth.



-Meredith

Comments

[loving kitten luna]

its beautifull i wrote something kinda like it myself

[maydaymouse]

It's pretty good, just work on the grammar, puntcuation and spelling, but all in all I'd give it a 5/5.