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What gave you the right?
Who gave you the right?
The right to mess with my life?
you know nothing of me.
You don't give me a chance.
Now I will stop your progress.
to tear me from my love.
I WILL STOP YOU!
- Title: Why?
- Artist: yugioh178
- Description: Something I wrote because I am pissed at someone in my life, leave me a comment so I can improve
- Date: 03/24/2009
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- Sir Shay - 03/26/2009
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The last few lines are extremely disjointed and throw of the flow that this poem was beginning to follow.
Perhaps revision? - Report As Spam
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