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Is love supposed to suck this much?
Can't think, can't see.
Light head, pounding heart
Thudding in my chest.
Hold him close
Breathe in his warm sent
Cling, hold, electricity at every touch
Won't breathe, can't breathe
Is there a difference anymore?
Breath caught
Chest constrict
Heart thud
Hands sweat
Every thing gone
Drift, float
Every thing lost
In a flood if color and sound
Time continues
Leaves me behind
Lost, gone, drowning
Struggle to stay afloat
In this tide of emotion and love
So I ask again,
Is love supposed to suck this much?
- by shannonbookworm14 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/19/2009 |
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- Title: *Sigh* Does Love REALLY Suck?
- Artist: shannonbookworm14
- Description: Is love supposed to suck this much? Or is it just me? Is love supposed to cling to your every move? Is it supposed to constrict your chest? Is this really what love does? Here's the biggest question of all . . . is it worth it?
- Date: 03/19/2009
- Tags: sigh does love really suck
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Mighty Isabella - 03/30/2009
- i absolutly love it
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- Rose_of_Tae - 03/27/2009
- I like the imagery, I can see you really tried to let the reader know exactly how you feel. Thats sounds like unrequited love to me though.
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- Kashi2Kashi - 03/27/2009
- true and awesome- best qualities for a poem
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- Sweet alexisthebest - 03/26/2009
- LOVE it its true sometimes
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- Satonella - 03/19/2009
- amazing
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