My Happy Poem

• Artist: XxXBleeding_RainbowXxX
• Description: Ha ha, the effects of duster and shrooms really open my mind to possibilities I never knew were there. XD
  This is probably the weirdest most retarded poem I've written.
  Ha ha, bear in mind I was under the influence.
• Date: 03/18/2009
• Tags: happy poem asher

So here it is,
The happy one.
Today I'll have a bit of fun.

A rhapsody.
A melody.
My opus and my symphony.

A delectable, delightful treat.
A candy, oh, a wicked sweet.

My soul.
A stroll.
Completely droll.
Delightfully out of control.

So here you go.
My vertigo.
My trip through kilometers of snow.

Hold on tight.
Don't try to fight.
My happy poem,
Just drips delight

Like honey from a child's tongue,
Or whispers of the aging young.

A lullaby that makes you cry,
The tears of happy years gone by.

Watch your step,
The path is steep,
So take a deep breath before you leap

Into a world of endless bliss,
As charming as a baby's kiss.

And right when you arrive right there,
You'll never leave.
It's true.
I swear.

My world,
My truth.
My universe.
My haven in my merry verse.

It welcomes you,
With open arms.
You're flattered by its mirthful charms.

So stay awhile.
Right in the shade
Of the happiest poem
I've ever made.

Comments

[x Z O M B E x]

i thought it was cool

[SHiNYxChaRizArd]

well then..... i can tell you were high as a kite! xD

[samuelismage]

it relly nice but 1 too long, 2 "my Heaven in My Memory verse" that goes better check mine out, if u wnat

[XxXBleeding_RainbowXxX]

Ha ha if you read my description you'd notice that I didn't even know what I was talking about. Much less would I pay attention to rhythm.

[missmapleleaf]

In terms of rhythm, "So take a deep breath before you leap" should be "Take a breath before you leap"
It would make for a smoother read.

[Lady Venibeth]

I can tell you were on something, lol.