Mizz My dad

• Artist: kotten_mouth_kid
• Description: dad....
• Date: 03/16/2009
• Tags: boring

i mizz my dad.
right now i do.
let me come wit you.
take me to.

i long to sit and laugh with you why didnt you stay and wait
but you met your marker at the golden gate.

some times i cry myself to sleep
and then i remember your smile that warms my heart to my feet
my head hurts my heart aches
but my eyes tell me you are safe.
now i have to keep my head up and smile
to the time we had and i got to cry for a while.
now you know i miss you bad
but yet your ok so im gald

Comments

[101 bubbles]

thats good. but its also sad. sad good job though

[Kiunto]

I agree with defiled_mj-.
It's got great potential though.

[defiled_mj]

You should have written it differently.