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It is quiet, too quiet,
to be out here alone
quiet
so quiet
I must find my way home.
I am lonley, so lonely,
being swallowed up
in total darkness
Lost, afraid...
Confused and alone.
But nothing will stop me
'Till I get to you.
Your love keeps me going
Just like the sun and the moon.
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- by sweet treat 1316 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/10/2009 |
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- Title: Love like the Sun and Moon
- Artist: sweet treat 1316
- Description: I just wanted to test this out... this is my first time posting something in the arenas, so comment me, just don't be to harsh.... please! lol! im just so excited, cuz my bf proposed to me, and my parents said yes...YAY!!!! lol! :)
- Date: 03/10/2009
- Tags: romance
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Comments (4 Comments)
- xXsecret_artistXx - 04/01/2009
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CONGRADULATIONS! biggrin
not the best poem but still good! - Report As Spam
- Cloffing Pempslider - 03/14/2009
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Cliched, unpunctuated, boring. You obviously went to no effort writing it.
Congratulations on your engagement. - Report As Spam
- JavaLeen - 03/12/2009
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umm... I'm not exactly impressed (hope that won't blow your bubble or smtg... I'm just being honest), but again, I'm not really into poetry after all...
I'll give you 5 still. ^^ - Report As Spam
- steph11on12 - 03/10/2009
- Wow really goo smile better than my lit class lol
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