My Secret

• Artist: The Great Lion Queen
• Description: This is a poem I wrote from Rose's POV. Rose is a dragon/human hibrid. her grandfather makes her go to a human school. she meets a boy who loves 'mythical creatures' who she falls in love with and you can see the problem with this.
• Date: 03/08/2009
• Tags: secret

My Secret

Way down deep inside
I have something that I hide
I can't even tell my friends at school
but they don't bug me, so it's cool
Ive been like this for many years
sometimes I just breakdown in tears
For there's someone Ive been dying to tell
but I know if I do it won't end well
he'd run away and never look back
fearing if he didn't I would attack
It would only give him this pain too
we'd better keep this between me and you
My mother was a-

-Rose

Comments

[musikismahlyfe]

its nice, i like d rhyme scheme
and d way it was convey..

Great job!

=D

[Bellatrix Scarlet]

This is good! It's often difficult to write from another person's perspective, but you did this really well. It's also a very casual piece, but not too casual, you know? Good job.

[ClassicHawk]

I've got a secret.
A dirty little secret.