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Breathless...
That is how I felt when I first gazed upon you.
The way you moved, with an ethereal grace and astounding beauty..
Your eyes, they captivated me.
Dark infinite pools of passion, I lost all sense of self when I looked at you.
I could not resist the pull you had on me.
Your voice... was and is the most beautiful sound I have ever heard.
I knew when I saw you that I was in the presence of one greater than I.
Each time your lips parted, I felt that it was a miracle that we ever met.
I knew that I would do whatever it took to make you happy.
I would run to the ends of the earth, just to see your dazzling smile.
I would give my body, my mind, and my soul to share with you forever.
My heart was at war with my mind: it was filled with thoughts of you, so much love and desire I thought I would explode.
I was sure I would give anything to see you, to hold you, to have you in my arms..
I knew that only an idiot would do anything to hurt you, to make you unhappy.
And yet I became that fool.
I was torn inside; I felt I would go insane from the pain..
Tormented, my mind and heart were; I wanted to die a painful death for what I did to you.
And so I hardened my heart in a desperate attempt to close the wounds I had made.
I wished that I could turn back time, rewrite the wrongs I had done..
But I cannot rewrite time.
All I can do is learn from my mistakes and move on.
To this day, I wished that I had not ruined the friendship/relationship we had.
My love for you was like Pandora's box.
Complicated at times, but underneath all that, I loved and to this very day still love you.
- Title: Pandora's Love
- Artist: superaku
- Description: For someone I held close to my heart.
- Date: 03/04/2009
- Tags: pandoras love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- superaku - 05/18/2009
- Ok. First off, I've lost too many people close to me to measure and the feelings I had when those people left me were... unbearable. I.. am so sorry I didn't mean to pry where I wasn't supposed to..Please forgive me.
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- iStab Crayons - 05/07/2009
- Response to Yami Inarisia's question: well how I related to it was that......I lost my....... my...... my brother when he was with his fiance and well, someone decided they hated my brother a little while before that, so, that someone shot him in the stomach when him and his fiance were walking out of walmart. He.... he was my world, the only person who understood me. You probaly wouldn't understand that Ifeeling, but if you do you know how that feels.
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- XallXaloneXbrokenX - 04/06/2009
- Awesome!!*claps* Beautiful, well writen, it was a little long, but well worth it! Your good at poetryXD keep it up buddy!XD
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- Lazuras Lefure - 04/06/2009
- A little bit wordy and somewhat repetitive. If you fixed these two aspects, you've honestly got a ton of talent and potential growth. Keep practicing, and don't sell out. Don't let anyone other than yourself influence your work, and you'll be fine.
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- Fallen Graceling - 04/05/2009
- Very strong emotions in that poem, well done. 5/5
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- within love - 04/05/2009
- Wow. Very beautiful and sad. 5/5
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- superaku - 03/07/2009
- To emo x vamp: If you don't mind me asking, how did you relate to it?You can Pm me and tell me if you want to if it is really personal.
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