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Out of the depths of my heart
and soul I cry out. Wanting to
be close to someone, but how
can I?
What happened to the deep
blue night starlit sky where
we met? Time wasting away;
the hours of longing to have
what I cannot.
Reaching out and only
grabbing wisps of air. No warm
hand inside mine to heat my cold
hands. Nothing, but the hard cold air
I hear-silence.
Feeling confused with a mix of
emotions toiling in my head. Can the
emotions go down? No, hear at the end
of this road.
- by eamanemelencol |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/24/2009 |
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- Title: Lost
- Artist: eamanemelencol
- Description: It is a poem that I wrote about a girl wanting to be with someone-a romance that could never fully blossom.
- Date: 02/24/2009
- Tags: lost romance sadness
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Comments (1 Comments)
- ilikethose - 02/25/2009
- I love the imagery of your work, especially "grabbing at wisps of air," but I think the way you've decided to cut up the lines is a little choppy. Other than that, it's wonderful. Sorry, I hope you don't mind some constructive criticism. >.<
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